Made-up ‘rules’ may offer a path to clarity

Columnist and language expert Ben Yagoda resorted to all caps in a brief Twitter exchange on the difference (if any) between “since” and “because.”

“There is NEVER confusion,” he said several weeks ago during a chat sponsored by the American Copy Editors Society.

That was in response to my assertion that “because” remains safer than “since” where there may be confusion with a time element.

I tell my copy editing students to beware of absolutes in writing. Absolutes in all caps are especially risky. Yagoda offers a defense of his position in the Lingua Franca column in the Chronicle of Higher Education.

sincebecauseCopy editors, despite their best intentions, can come across as stuffy and pedantic because we sometimes perpetuate standards of English usage that may differ from the way people casually speak and write. “Because” vs. “since” provides a fair example. In the wild, “since” is used for “because” with aplomb and very few bar fights can be attributed to disputes over this usage. The distinction between “since” for time and “since” for cause is not something to fear, but I do think it is something to consider.

Sometimes in the debate between what is a real rule and what is a made-up rule (tricky, as there is no rulebook), we overlook the reality that “rule” can sometimes be shorthand for “good writing.”

I will grant that there is no “rule” of grammar that says “since” should be restricted to time elements and “because” used for causation. Blindly substituting can take away nuance and make writing more stilted. But there are cases where “because” is the safer choice.

In the Chronicle column, Yagoda suggests the example of confusion I offered was “ginned up.” My example was: “Europe suffered greatly since Hitler invaded Poland.” Yagoda said this “doesn’t sound like something that would actually be written.”

Well, no, probably not by a careful writer, which is the point. I disagree with his assertion that it wouldn’t be written in the temporal sense. He suggests “after” is more likely than “since” here. “After” might be better, but there is no shortage of examples of similar uses of the temporal “since.” A 1940 Montreal Gazette newspaper article speaks of “all losses suffered since Hitler invaded the Low Countries,” to mean “after” the invasion.

For causation, Yagoda suggests “as a result of” is more likely. But I can imagine the causal sense of “since” being so used in a high school or college history paper.

In historic terms, Europe suffered far more greatly after Hitler turned his attention from Poland. But one could suggest that after the invasion of Poland and because of the ensuing declarations of war, Europe suffered. “Since,” then, works in either the temporal or causal sense.

So, I do think my example works, but there are better examples. Yagoda takes issue with the response from Erin Brenner, the editor of Copyediting Newsletter. Brenner, who was the guest of the ACES chat, offered a much better rebuttal than mine to the assertion that “there is NEVER confusion.”

Brenner tweeted “Since he went out, I’ve been chatting.”

Yagoda suggests the ambiguity there is desirable. Literary ambiguity can be desirable, except in cases when ambiguity is not desirable. Saying confusion is a good thing is not a strong defense of the assertion that there is never confusion.

One more good example comes from Bryan Garner, author of “Garner’s Modern American Usage.” Yagoda cites Garner, who writes in his entry for “since”: “Despite the canard that the word properly relates only to time, the causal meaning has existed continuously in the English language for more than a thousand years.”

But Garner also goes on to say “be careful, though, of starting a sentence with since and then using a past-tense example.

Garner’s example, from the Sporting News: “Since Memphis exposed Louisville’s main weakness … the Cards have struggled.” Garner writes: “the reader wonders, at least momentarily, whether the Cards have suffered because of or just after the upset.”

So, Garner, the prescriptivist, says there is no rule, but be cautious where there might be confusion.

The lack of confusion is the goal of good writing and good copy editing. Even in cases where the meaning is clear enough, we don’t want the reader to wonder even momentarily which meaning we’re going for. It’s not always about rules, but it is about good writing.

8 thoughts on “Made-up ‘rules’ may offer a path to clarity

  1. Unfortunately, the “rule” is not “watch out for possible confusion when using ‘since’ for ‘because.’ but “DO NOT use ‘since’ for ‘because,’” And while I take your point that it is possible for these artificial style rules to improve writing, what I see more often in practice is that they lead to mechanical search-and-replace editing.

  2. Yagoda doth protest too much. I don’t think any thinking copy editors disagree with his basic points: that “since” meaning (approximately) “because” is NOT wrong, and that the ambiguity warned of is rare at best. As you say, Mark, he seems to be trapped into defending an untenably absolute position and does so poorly. And as you also say, it’s a good lesson for copy editors who cling to the black and white and “the style.”

  3. Because I have been exposed to a great deal of writing about bogus rules, I have become more aware of the changes I make in copy and strive to justify to myself that the change I am making improves the copy. And, since I have gone to work for publications aimed at well-educated professionals (accountants), I have become more sensitive to the nuances of “since” and “because.” I don’t change every instance that I would have in my more pedantic days, but I do change some for clarity.

    Thanks, Mark, for this post.

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  5. In defense of Yagoda’s rhetorical strategy, often the best way to cope with people who insist on rigid, arbitrary rules (I’m glad to see you aren’t one of them) is to give them a rigid and arbitrary reply. For example: “No. That is NOT the rule. The RULE is that that and which are both acceptable in non-restrictive relative clauses.” This satisfies the rule-quoter’s hidden or not-so-hidden desire to be told what to do, thus relieving them of any need for judgement.

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  7. I agree that we need to avoid confusion, but I think the only confusion is when “since” is in the first clause. When “since” is in the second clause, use no comma for the time meaning and a comma for the explanatory meaning. A comma before “since” makes sense when it’s really an informal replacement for the coordinating conjunction “for.” In speaking, there is a pause before “for” and before “for”-like “since” but not before time “since.”

    Note the commas in the (b) sentences below.

    Mark Allen’s example:
    1a. Europe suffered greatly since Hitler invaded Poland. [time; no pause; possibly ambiguous]
    1b. Europe suffered greatly, since [for / seeing as how] Hitler invaded Poland. [explanation; pause; not ambiguous]

    Erin Brenner’s example (inverted):
    2a. I’ve been chatting since he went out. [time; no pause; possibly ambiguous]
    2b. I’ve been chatting, since [for / seeing as how] he went out. [explanation; pause; not ambiguous]

    Additionally, I’ll repurpose the “because” examples from Geoffrey Pullum’s “Can you have a comma before because?” (http://languagelog.ldc.upenn.edu/nll/?p=3338):

    3a. I didn’t marry Bob because I wanted a stable home life. [no pause; not "for" or "since"; possibly ambiguous]
    3b. I didn’t marry Bob, because [for / seeing as how / since] I wanted a stable home life. [pause; not ambiguous]

  8. What I should have said more explicitly is that you can unambiguously use “since” in the explanatory/nontemporal sense if you put it in the second clause and put a comma before it. There may be cases where you use “since” in the temporal sense (without a comma) and it will ambiguous.

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